Monday, 2 August 2010

WE AND YOU... A poem by Rayla

Check this out:
http://www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=179126&memberid=115539

7 comments:

Faiyaz said...

Your poems remind me of CHAUCER!
Not the Mango!

Faiyaz said...

We And You.....
WAY to go!

roydebnath said...

Beautiful, 'twas a wonderful read on this lonely, rainy morning; the skies here are grey, yet the mention of blue transported me somewhere else, pleasant..

arun bhatt said...

My takeaway lines are:

" I'd heard that last in an island by the jetty a lifetime ago.

I want to paint but what can I do.....

caught between a village and a city
desire and need
work and worship....."

I hope the poetess finds her space

Anonymous said...

Vimal! Didnt dream this would go here, it was for that vote biz...

but great to get any feedback at all/
Poetess is too big a word for anything like me, but tx everyone for the mention..

my Dad just turned 87 and was/ is will always be a traveller/ at peace when he's in movement. now theyve settled in one place and he's bored enuff to create tedious work for himself, like making a guitar..

i suspect i'm like him, minus the precision work he puts in :

" settled only when in transit.."

at home, with the homeless : f Ive not properly confused you before, this would :)

( shall post my parents pic ! )
thanks for being so supportive thru all ramblings.

Nargis said...

Now this is what I call poetry..!! WOW!!...

Way to go girl....:-}

thelma/david/samuel said...

HEYA SWEET LIL HEART,

I HEAR THE SOUND OF A LIL GIRL.....
lOST...
BETWEEN THE SHEETS....
OF
yesterday,today and tomorrow.

(Right now am totally enveloped
in the nostalgia of our chilhood)