Hai mastikhor..magar mann ke sacche
Umr hogi 40..45..50 ya 55 (pacchpan)
Koot koot ke bhari hai inme Bachpan
Hui sabko Pune mein milne ki tammanna
Jab ayi Pardes se humari nakhrewali Reena
Ashu aur Alpana ne kiya badhiya intezaam
Unke intezaam ko hum sabka salaam
Woh Le Meridian ka ek kona
ek jadugar bhi kiya jaadu tona
Arun ne bhi dikhaya apna chamatkar
Mushkil se hua jadugar ka nayya paar
Baatein chali un 37/38/40 saal ke har pal ki
Batein chali school ke dino ki, Career ki
Bacchon ki, Teachers ki, Berhampur ki
Mumbai ki, Pune ki, Filmo ki
Nahin choda humne baatein badnam munni aur sheila ki jawani ki
Baaton baaton mein gujar gaya poora din
Bichadne ne ki pal aaya toh udhas hua mann
Yeh sab mumkin kiya Godfather Vimal Parmar
Hum sab hai aap ke shukr guzaar
Ek wada karo....milne ki koshish karenge baar baar
10 comments:
Wow, the poet in Lakshmi is out in full force. That is really good, :)
Bahoot bholo lekhi cho.
kintu munni bodnam hela aa-oo sheila ro jobani bisayo re tomme jaha lekhilo moo say kotha bujhi parlee naheen!!!!
Ah ! the neo - shayar on the firmament ! Ershad !
wow laxmi, to add 2 ur various attributes ( grt personality, warmth and a sense of humour 2 mention a few) -u have gone and put the icing on the cake- u r a poet in full bloom. or is it a case of - main shayar to nhin, magar aai haseen (read reena), jab se dekha.....?
Thank u guys.
@Arun.. Apne aap ko Tees Maar Khan na samjho...Dabangg bano.
Apono naw bujhile aaoo kiye bujhibe
@Alpana...Itne saare hasinaaoon se milke.. shayariii aagayi.
Anyways...main bas pal do pal ka hi shayar hoon.
I second the WOW Laxmi! Kitna khoobsoorat poem - aap to chhupi rustam (I mean poet niklin). Very touching and heart warming!
Wah Ustad, bahut badhia kavita hai.
Laxmi,,,u have so beautifully worded the get-together...sure am eagerly awiting the next one,,,,cant we make it like a kitty??compulsory milna hai,,,at least once in 2 mnths,,,what say ???
Good idea Ashu. What say Arun, Vimal, Alpana, Aruna, Udaya ... and all those who can make it. Venue could be my place if its convenient to all of you.
Wow...! This is too good...!!
You summed up the day so well.
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